Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Complaint

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  1. YNgTruth

    YNgTruth New Member MEMBER

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    My Complaint


    I wish I wish I wish
    That people coul b real
    Instead ther filled wit it
    Yet Im there. there still

    I continue to luv
    W/out any hugs
    Let alone kisses
    Getting called *******?

    Is it my fault or not?
    Continue or Stop?

    Im getting weary
    Fill my foot shakey
    Bout to dip
    Im fed up/sick

    Ill from bein used
    Used and abused
    Abused and misued
    Somebody pass tha tissue!!!!
    Im on one. catch tha issue!!

    My complaint has been filed!!
    Wut more to do .Im tired!!!!
    Can u feel me .im fired!!!!
    Help please 4 I retire!!!!

    Dont wanna throw the towel
    Dont wanna be lonely, I howl
    Like a wolf or sumtin
    Hopen dat mab someone
    Might hear an bring tha solution
    Is he crazy?, u question

    Naw listen, hear, catch, tha vision
    Tha pursuit of LUV is my mission.

    Truth
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...
     
  3. gempis

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    people are mean
    people are cold
    people are fake
    people are crazy
    people lie
    people perpetrate
    it's true
    it's discouraging
    but
    people are loving
    people are nice
    people are genuine
    people are caring
    people hug
    people watch out for others

    just keep your eyes on those people and
    forget about the rest ;)
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PS

    Welcome to destee, YNgTruth. :wave: :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic quiet flowz
    from ya heart da emotion drip
    indeed gempis said it all but relax ya home
    upon family & friendz u kin now
    we embrace , sing in grace here theirs no fakes
    welcome within :) smile:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome:wave:
    nice flow
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome and very nice flow...deep! much love to you.
     
  8. YNgTruth

    YNgTruth New Member MEMBER

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    Thank u fah all yah comments and replys much luv to all....let GOD lead in all u do....gone an much luv.p.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome & likewise
     
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