Black Poetry : My Coffee Extreme

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Mar 19, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will you be my Coffee extreme?
    Can I sip you? Coat my insides
    what comprises you ... "yes, please
    a little cream will do"
    Maxwell House will just tease me
    but let's play Maxwell to baseline
    our addiction to playing house/you
    can be the mother of screams
    I'll be the proud father of
    actions referent for your dreams...
    "yes, a little sugar please"
    Can I be a little more demanding?
    "Give me some sugar!" subdue
    me with your brown sugar / sugar
    kiss me 'til I diabetically convulse
    in slow motion / your hocus pocus
    magic potion has me calling you
    the great Houdini but I don't want
    to escape you / but be married to
    the tears I've wept because of you
    Will you be my Coffee extreme?
    Can I suck the Coffee beans of your
    bodily tree / taste you undiluted
    a straight to the vein coat my brains
    membranes in You-paccino and be
    strung out on your black eXtasy /
    Will you...Can You...Won't you...
    be my Coffee extreme?

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    I wasn't really a coffee drinker prior to reading this, but I guess I'll file suit with the line of customers waiting at the checkout at Starbucks or Cairabu Coffee Stores in order to purchase some COFFEE Extreme...if that's what you like!

    Superb flow...
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hell yeah!!! Vintage Verb!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm just not even gonna say anythang...

    umm... umm... umm...

    GrindingCoffeeBean&ListeninToMaxwell...;)
    Sunshyne~
     
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    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyght flow and i sit here in awwwwwe!
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey ya'll thank you for the vibes...gotta run coffee's waitin'

    one love, blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES SIR! DIZZZAMMMM!!
    YA ON TARGET IN DES FLOW
    MAN KEEP IT UP BLAKVERB~~
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Caffeine Rush...

    Whew! :rolling: you gotta excuse me; this piece has me a little hyper. :hot: Hot, hot piece, poet...
     
  9. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somebody said coffee

    Verb i love mines black
    and i tell u
    ya add no cream here
    u better stop doing des to me....
     
  10. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum!!!

    gave me a caffiene rush just readin it!!

    u got talent boy....
    hot ****....u sho' do!!


    ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)
     
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