Black Poetry : My Chosen Profession

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, Jul 3, 2002.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    a vision, an illussion
    a though of lust moderated my music
    controling movement
    a moment lost to time
    :sand:
    time being the one thing I have
    in abundance
    so I sit and stare
    lost to the music
    lost in the moment
    lost to a sing frame of time
    which only remeind me that
    the business is the game.

    I play the the songs to
    make love a distant relative
    to the reality I build
    the imagery
    to turn tricks on idol minds
    turns tricks on minds
    turns tricks
    off visions, illusions
    still lectured by music
    to controll movement
    from his side
    to her back :nono: side
    across navel rings that hang down upon
    and focus attention to thong under pants
    pushed aside to reveal the total
    worth of what I want you to give.
    a moment, a message
    a shoulder, an admirer
    all I see in a days peep
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm

    trying to figure this out..... like the flow though but still scratching ma noggin cause i don't think what i'm thinking is what you talkin bout.



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  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Scribe...

    I like the way the piece flows, but very curious of the chosen profession, cause what I'm thinkin probably ain't what u intended but then again who knows...keep the flow!:cool:
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice peice
     
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