Black Poetry : My Captor

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Distinct and definitive...
    A feeling uncompromised and clarified.
    I rode the high clouds of this emotion....
    coasting out of control and boardering on
    a seemilgly healthy devotion.

    For me, Reason, did not enter the room.
    No space on the dance floor to waltz.
    I....
    Too caught up in potent fumes of something
    I cold not diffuse and I am confused...God, what do I do?

    At the first knock,
    I race to the door!
    It must be some sort of redemption from this
    sweet misery.
    Doors thrown open and i'm face to face with...
    nothing. Not even a shred of hope.

    Tapped lightly on my shoulder,
    I turn and stare into the alluring face of
    my charming captor...
    LOVE greets me with a kiss on both cheeks,
    and I float away upon centuries worth of
    chocolate-dipped bliss.

    LOVE, has me.
    Distinct and un-relenting.
    I surrender.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "Earth's Delight" Publishing
    PropheticNsyght
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da things love can do sometime
    tyte scribing u on fire here !!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your pen works wonders...I enjoy your work, thanks for inviting us in your world.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen and Rich once again my heart is on fire with gratitude and love to you both! God bless
     
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    i love smart poetry...
    this was cleverly written, very clever
    and the ending was, as we say in da hood; 'like dat'
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown:aawwwwww man....you move me:bowdown:
     
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    Love can take us to so many destinations, within and beyond...tight write.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These two stanzas hit me like a strong gust of wind...
    the kind that temporarily strips you of your breath

    Prophetic...I admit it..."I am an addict for your writing"... :sand:

    Keep it up poet...this was Unparalleled!
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :book: Just what I was expecting...poetic drama with a cupful of love. :jumping:
     
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    Luving This....Big Up!

    :spin: :spin: ...This had me on a spiral...
    The wordz here written, left a Brotha smitten
    PropheticNsyght...Keep spittin...I wish you-
    Peace, Power, and Prosperity.down: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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