Black Poetry : My Book

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Book
    I give You this book but most pages are already written some worn and tattered while others are not quite fitting.
    Yes You will find that alot are not touched and others are smoothly written.
    No. Dont worry this book has plenty of pages that still need to be written and even more that has a need for an author.
    My I place this book upon your alter?
    Can I trust you to "not" judge my life by my past chapters? Can I trust you with all of my non published works?
    You see I have feelings inside theese pages and they have carried alot of hurt. I have things that I still need to do and it will require alot of work.
    Can you use your pen of light to write my life?
    I need a new angel to inspire my sight.
    2 run her fingers through my pages and place my index together.
    Give my book a new cover so it can stand the weather.
    To explor my contents and help the second eddition to be better.
    So I ask you now can we write this book together?
    2002 copyright
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The book

    :wave: welcome to destee...
    enjoy your stay....
    ummm bout time you got here:angel1:


    THE BOOK
    I took this chance to open and read...
    the first page was of interest
    the tenth of intrigue
    the 20th was a wonder
    now that I have read half of chapter one........
    I would love to read more...
    the hidden pages will come to pass as this
    journey of the book takes flight
    I will fold and replace the ripe and torn....
    retype all that need to be heal.....
    And touch what have not been..
    The feeling you have inside theses pages...
    I want to feel and help release them all
    trust me with your non-publish works...
    Place them on this alter…
    for they are safe with me....
    so your new angel you have found will inspire you
    to new heights.....
    Run her fingers through your pages and
    soothe your pain...
    together we can conquer your world and mine....
    for your angel (I) will give this book a new cover with
    a new look as only you wish for...
    now I ask....
    can we write this book together?????
    Blackangel (2002 copyright)
    :angel1: love ya flow....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    happy u join us in scribe as u vibe from da book :spinn:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    what a book let it flow
    to ya heart we will show
    flip da pages release da pain
    from da caressin sign ya name
    to ya book of gold
    the treasure story told
    with da trust we bond
    open and flow let us know
    as we welcome u within ya kin now ! :jumping:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love ya flow......and welcome to the Destee family.
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ty Angel..... I always loved your flow

    Ty Rich.... im feeling your work

    Ty...foxylady

    all Im just into this site it is al of that!
     
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    most welcome and thank u happy u like this home
    enjoy and flow right on .....
    we have to drop one together soon ...
     
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    I absolutely love this piece!
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty..................angelicsage peace n poetry 2 U
     
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    da book has many chapters
    many things have play'd factors
    to where i am at today
    judge me for who i am
    not who i was
    ok
    i did all this to say
    that you are worth my truth
    no need to play sleuth
    or inspector gadget
    i'm drawn to ya essence like
    the opposite ends of a magnet
    so...
    here's my book of life
    you can have it....

    dude...i hope to see you around more
    this was supa tyte...
    we need some more brothas lay'n it down like this...word
    peace
    khasm
     
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    WeLcOmE caramelpython...:wave:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    I'll be lookin for the pages of ya book :)
     
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