Black Poetry : My Body Weeped (refresh)

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  1. JuicyLvsYa

    JuicyLvsYa Member MEMBER

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    My body weeped for you lastnight
    the feel was so real
    you creeped into my dream
    like a hottub full of moist steam
    moisterizing my mind
    creating a liquid inside
    of this spell I'm under
    of hot passionate thunder
    swelling my breast
    you put my body to the test
    my hands became yours
    venturing in places
    that make me roar
    brewing my sap
    can you feel that?

    My body weeped
    when you penetrated my desire
    with a controlled fire
    of dancing manly hands
    a rhythm of your revolving touch
    the touch that made me clutch
    my sheets
    and my body seep
    seep deep inside me so tense
    I was aching for your entrance
    open the door and explore
    wanting more
    deep inside
    my thighs
    floating like a rollercoaster ride
    through the liquid fire
    let's go higher
    do you feel my desire?

    My body weeped
    when I turned over in my sleep
    feeling your body in mines
    chills up and down my spine
    taking me from behind
    producing soft cries
    of pleasurable moans
    as we roll our groins
    consummating a stream
    of mutual cream
    slowly through the night
    it felt so right
    we're in sinc
    dont you think?

    Daylight creeped
    my body still weeped
    wanting another repeat
    of the night heat
    as I smiled
    knowing we will meet again tonight
    for another contact of this act
    when you creep
    between my sheets
    in my midnight sleep
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one word.....damng..I can'yt find the right one...This was tyte!!! Makes me wanna :eek: well, yaknow..... :blush: Great flow! :heart:
     
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    Sweet hot flow....sizzling...I like this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome !!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i send u love
    welcome wit dis bless flow
    welcome in this good to know u
    welcome to the family of love peace & respect
    dis was tyte scribing poet !:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME TO DESTEE!! :):):):):) It's so nice to have you here poet. I like this flow it's so breath taking I feel your words and your vibe what else can I say I luv it until next time

    keep flowin
     
  6. JuicyLvsYa

    JuicyLvsYa Member MEMBER

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    thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    glad ur here as part of family
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Oooooh" Sookie Sookie now!!!!:eek:

    This was steamy and sexy... Nice flow keep expressing yourself
    and flowing with the senuality (smile)

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...wasn't this steamy but smooth. Nice flow!
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaay My Sister Juuuuuuuicy !!!! :wave:

    Haaaaaaaaaaaaay Sister ... whew ... where ya been chile ??!!! Oohhhhh i'm so happy to have you back home ... did you want to create a new screenname or did you just forget your last one ?? ... Here is your old one Sister ... Juicylv4u2. As i looked back to get that info for you, i found that you are the 7th person that ever joined ... probably the second cause i could have been all of those first 6 ... :lol: ... you know how we had to do in those early lean days! Wow ... i been miss'n ya Gurl ... so glad you're back in the house. Looking forward to hearing this peace on the ********. You know i carried on something terrible when i saw your name in voice chat ... www.************/chat ... :lol: ... whewwwww Lawd! God is Good. I saw where you had a post saying you were back home so i'm going to go find it now and cut and paste this same text into it too. You know a Sister dun got older and gotta cut back on all unnecessary key strokes ... :lol: ... hahahaha ... whewwww ... oohhhhh Juicy ... Welcome Home Sister! Love you so much.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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