Black Poetry : My Body Is Calling

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Apr 11, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a lot on my mind
    and I need you here
    to help me unwind...
    I need you to take all
    your clothes off so I can
    feel your soft skin next
    to mines...I want you to
    rub my body up and down,
    left and right so I can feel
    oh so right...I want you to
    kiss me from head to toe
    without any measure so that
    you can find my buried treasure...
    I want you to go deep inside
    me because there's no better
    place you could ever be...
    Just thinking of you makes
    my spirits rise because you
    got me so mesmerized...Having
    you next to me makes me feel so
    weak...I want to be able to give
    you a sneak peak of everything
    I have inside me...
    I want to take you places
    you never been before so you
    can always come back for
    much more...My body is calling
    for your body and I've been
    waiting so patiently...I can't
    fight this feeling anymore I
    need you to help take me to
    destiny...I will have the candle
    lite, rose peddles, and red wine
    waiting for you when you come
    to see me...I want you to give me
    everything you got inside you...
    Take your time you don't got to
    rush, just be gentle my body
    needs to be loved...I can't wait
    until this day does come so
    all we can do is make sweet love...
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this right here.I'm finna turn on some Rkelly lol good job :tongue:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you posed this so well
    feelin ya flow
    nice one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u took me on a ride here this was well felt
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Posed sweet with a touch of spice, I enjoyed this.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    words of burning desire

    nice write.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  7. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: for the love
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    careful now...we wouldn't want to set off too many :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: 's...because in no time, you won't know if you're comming or :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: or going ;) but I guess when :luvv: is in the making...nothing else matters :nuts:
    this came across well... :thanks: for sharing
     
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