Black Poetry : My Body Is Calling

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  1. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    I got a lot on my mind
    and I need you here
    to help me unwind

    I need you to take
    all your clothes off
    so I can feel your soft
    skin next to mines

    I want you to rub my body
    up and down, left and right
    so I can fell oh so right

    I want you to kiss me
    from head to toe without
    any measure so that
    you can find my buried
    treasure

    I want you to go deep
    inside me because there's
    no better place you could
    ever be

    Just thinking of you makes
    my spirits rise because boy
    you got me so mesmerized

    Having you next to me makes
    me feel so weak, I want to be
    able to give you a sneak peak
    of everything I have inside of me

    I want to take you places you
    never been before so you can
    always come back for much more

    My body is calling for your body
    and I've been waiting so patiently
    I can't fight this feeling anymore
    I need you to help take me to destiny

    I will have the candle light, rose
    peddles, and red wine waiting for
    you when you come to see me

    I want you to give me everything you
    got inside you, take your time you
    don't have to rush, just be gentle
    my body needs to be loved

    I can't wait until this day comes
    so all we can do is make sweet love
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wowowowowowow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :hot: now THAT'S a hot piece...gurll, don't keep him waiting too long:lol:
     
  3. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    thank SwtT Ill try not to keep him waiting him to long
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    he's lucky and ur hotttttttttttt!!!
    let him feel da passion
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW! It's so too hot in here! LOL This was tight, tight, tight.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd have to agree with everyone else, this is fire. Keep em coming...
     
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