Black Poetry : my blues

[KentuckianKween]

hey folks... i've been strugglin with this ***** known to most as writer's block... it's really kickin my ***... so as a writing exercise, i had my niece write down a few common objects on a few slips of paper... we put em in a hat, she drew blind, and i wrote about it... this is the result:


"my blues"



i ain’t never known a man
that could hold me
better than my blues...

my blues
hug me like
a second skin
breathin me
a second wind
cradlin broad cinnamon hips and
protectin edible chocolate thighs
from reflectin rovin eyes
talkin’ bout

“look, brotha
look
but don’t touch...”

my blues
fit me just fine
and warm me like
the gloved hand
of the Sahara...
with my hands on my hips i
strut
past the nile
and wink as it waves
to the sway of my back
and i
glide
past Egypt’s sphinx
and smile as it shields it eyes
cause my blues
are just too bright

i step carefully
so my blues don’t fade...

carefully

i

step and

slide
into a room
and let my blues
take control
let my backbone slip
with my hand ‘pon my hips
and dive into the
oohhs and aaahhs
that surround
the air around
my aboundin blues
as they
tighten their grip
on my exterior
and smooth and stroke
my interior
as i run my hand
‘cross my posterior
with you watchin me
lettin your eyes
accent my low-cut
high-rise
tye-dyed blues...

yeah,

look, brotha
look
but don’t touch...




the object in question: my favorite jeans
be easy yall... peace...

 

[LISTERSCRIBIN']

kween, gurl, that's a great idea for writer's block. this piece is very nicely written. writer's block?...what writer's block?
keep on scribin', i'm watchin'.


~~~inkdrops~~~

 

[N2urSoul]

Kween

Looks to me like that wall came down .... and the writer's block that you had -- has crumbled! This piece is very well scribed... I'm lovin' the idea behind it...

Whateva was blockin' you B4 -- please send it my way so that when my walls come tumblin' down -- my **** will be as explosive as this piece is!

Well written thought!

One Luv.

 

[Heartbeat]

Yessss! Awesome piece Kween. Thank you and your niece.

BE

 

[Da Street So'ja]

writer's block

phooey
you just thinking to hard

if you got writer's block
then i'm a chinese lady living in Wyoming

when you get some more of that block
hit us with some more of your God given talents please


<DSS>