Black Poetry : My Blood Bleeds Destee

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The source of passion
    that keeps me going
    the life giving essence
    that courses through my veins
    giving me the ability to pen the words that flows from my heart
    if one were to ***** my finger
    The color red will not be seen
    for when I bleed
    my blood bleeds Destee

    My heart beats
    Because of what flows through the ventricles
    awakening passion fire
    that allows me to paint pictures
    of the object of my desire
    the object of my desire
    is she who is a part of me
    She is my blood
    My blood that bleeds Destee

    The truth of the matter is that
    Destee
    has no idea
    that she is my blood
    that she ignites
    the fire that burns within
    and is the reason
    why I write
    What I write
    and
    when I write
    I write about my blood
    my blood that bleeds Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bruh you just go head and do this thing
    because when you bleed it destee woooweeee
    so much she just don't know about some brothers
    man this was fire & desire at it's best......tyte !
     
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    wow...pretty powerful...
     
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    from the beginning
    it was...as it was written
    alphabets...to words
    words...to sentences
    while consenting to be blessed
    through metered rhymes
    beating in time
    to Destee's heartbeat

    soldiers from way back
    feeling the power of the flow.

    well said, B.
     
  5. Bishop

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    Baller!!! Man I was thinking about u the other day...thank you for blessing me with your comments.
     
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    OH MY GOSH BISHOP !!!!!! ... :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush:

    this is THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING I HAVE EVER SEEN !!!!! ... :hearts1: ... :hearts1:

    OH MY GOSH !!!!

    who could imagine one saying such a thing as this ... to them ??

    :blush: ... my blood bleeds destee ... :blush:

    i love you Bishop ... Thank You! ... :love:

    i had to try my hand at this ... you inspire and encourage me ...

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    blood deep
    pouring free
    all in me
    let it be

    hot blood
    fires ignite
    erupting within
    and over again

    no idea at all
    you know me so well
    breathless and smiling
    at your orgasmic writing



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    For those that don't know ... i wrote my first poem ever in my life or on the internet ... with Bishop! ... :love:

    So this is really nice ... oh my gosh ... my blood bleeds destee ... oh my gosh ... that is sooo hot !!!!

    :flamingdevil::kaioken: :flamingdevil::kaioken::flamingdevil::kaioken: HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT !!!!! :flamingdevil::kaioken: :flamingdevil::kaioken: :flamingdevil::kaioken:

    :flamingdevil::kaioken: ... I LOVE YOU BISHOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP !!!!! ... whew !!!! ... :flamingdevil::kaioken:


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    :thankyou: :thankyou: :thankyou: :thankyou:


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    Bishop! Brother, I love this scribe...You've penned a great one...
     
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    Dnommo man its good to hear from you!!!!
     
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    Yes sir...I pop in once in a while...I see you are truly holding it down bro!
     
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    Bishop - Whoa! This made me sit straight up and I loved it. Harry Hyman
     
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