Quiet Poetry Lounge : my black man....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mkhaya lo', Apr 13, 2002.

  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY BLACK MAN....

    STRONG UNDILUTED ACCUSED

    FEARED REVERED MUSCLES PURE HARD

    GRINDING DRILLING DIGGING BUILDING

    SWEATING TIRED WALKING HOME EMPTY

    ALONE HEAVY THINKING CHILDREN HUNGRY DRINKING

    LOOKING LUSTING TAKING FORCING

    BLEEDING LEAVING RUNNING

    MISUNDERSTOOD DELINQUENT ANGRY CRIMINAL

    MURDERER MYSTIFIED MISQUOTED UNDERPAID

    MISRERESENTED RICH ISOLATED SHALLOW CONFUSED

    STUCK INSIDE OUTSIDE MISERABLE UNABLE TO FLY

    LOVED WANTED SECURE DEEP PRINCIPALED READ

    KNOWLEDGED CULTURED... MINE...

    ;)
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo!!! Bravo!!! this was superb and well described...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a masterpiece u scribe my sweet
    I loved how u set dis out .......keep movin upward !!
    TYGHT !!
     
  4. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the messages guys...mkhaya lo' is in love....with a man who doesn't know.....he inspired this scribe!

    lo'
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece. That be us.

    BE
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautifully said...

    loving all parts of him..because they are him..

    K
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully done! And most certainly wonderfully inspired.
    May you receive your heartfelt desire.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    you've got to claim it if you want it!

    love...equals...inspiration

    beautiful!!:heart:


    Aminata
     
  9. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's something about the black man that has always fascinated western civilasation. but through it all, whether stripped or not, the black man has survived, and even plays the game better than most western civilisations have realised. lets not always him down, but lets give honour where honour is due.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u say ......well now go head and love ....say it loud !!!
     
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