Black Poetry : MY BLACK BRATHA

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY BLACK BRATHA YOU R LIKE NO OTHA
    SO LEAN WITH BEAUTIFUL GEANS
    4 THAT I GIVE U AN EYE OF UNDENY
    UR SMILE IS BRIGHTER DEN THE SUN
    YES ITS SO BRIGHT THAT I GET BLIND
    BOI U IS SO FINE!
    YO LOOKS HAD ME TOOK
    YO PERSON GOT ME IN 4 A SPIN
    YO WALK IS MORE THAN TALK
    ITS YET SO SMOOTH THAT I FEEL MOVED
    YO VOICE GAVE ME NO CHOICE
    YO WORDS MADE ME LISTEN EVEN DOH I WAS REMINECING
    YO EYEZ R SO STEADY AS IF UR READY
    LIGHT BROWN WIT A LIL GREEN AS IF UR VISUALIZING A SEEN
    U IS SO UNIQUE WITH BEAUTIQUE!
    BOI I AM SO GLAD WE CAN MEET!
    YO SOUL IS SO DEEP, BUT YET STEEP
    THAT I EAT UR ERRWORD,BUT I YET GET HUNGRY 4 MORE
    YOU R SO DELICIOUS,YET NUTRICIOUS
    U GOT ME CRAVING 4 MORE KISSESE WEN UR MISSIN
    THAT WEN UR IN MY PRESENCES,WE'RE ALWAYZ CARESSIN
    AND NOW I FEEL LIKE I NO LONGER WANT U JUS BY ME
    BUT IN ME
    BOI CAN U FEEL ME?
    I ASK PLEAZE DONT DISAPPOINT ME?
    DONT CHU WANT ME?
    JUS BY MAKING LOVE 2 ME, UR GIVING ME STRONG EMOTION
    SOMETHING THAT I HAVE BEEN MISSING, SHOW IT THROUGH UR
    MOVEMENT
    WITH THAT UR GIVING ME A STATEMENT
    BOI U KNO OUR LOVE IS STRONGER THAN A PAVEMENT!
    JUS KNO THAT OUR INTERCOURCE IS UR RESOURCE
    AND YES I KNO UR OLDER,BUT I'M WISER
    BUT TOGETHA WE R FOR THE BETTA
    SO PLEAZE DON'T SAT WATEVA

    DEDICATED 2 PLP THAT ARE MATURE AND THATS IN LOVE WITH AN OLDA BRATHA (C) COPYWRITE
    (DONT COPY JUS CUZ U CANT KEEP IT REAL)
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo sista keep on with them hot flo's.:love:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was hott to def
    I was really loving this
    Much Love Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the beauty of a heart ...wise love and strong ambition
    love this flow here made me feel good .....................
     
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    Her Prerogative




    Love your gift, and it will love you in return :ref:
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STANK U NEVAR 4 SHOWIN A SISTAH SUM BLACKLUV

    STANK U HOWARDTSU 4 JUS READING IT AND GIVIN ME A COMMENT

    STANK U TANTRUM 4 LUVIN MY FLO

    STANK U RICH 4 FEELIN GUD BOUT MY POET

    AND STANK U 1POETSOUGHT 4 LUVIN MY GIFT, AND U KNO I LUV URZ 2 LOL

    BLACKLUV AND BP, BUT STANK U STANK U 4 SHOWIN A SISTAH SUM LUV
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love you flo on this one it was just the right kind of spicy
     
  9. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STANK U ASIMPLEPOET 4 SHOIN MEH SUM LUV,AND I LIKE YO FLO AS WELL

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI GHETTOAMBITION
    This is a very uplifting poem...feeling nothing but love for our brothers

    Peace Always
     
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