Black Poetry : My bestfriends Wedding

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  1. jerseyy22

    jerseyy22 Member MEMBER

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    here i sit in the church smiling,
    knowing deep down inside I'm hurt
    a tear starts to fall down my face
    as I for the first time realize that I'm about to come face to face with the woman that has taken my place.
    Forgive me cause I'm dressd in all black
    my heart has been stolen and I doubt that I'll ever get it back. You stand in the front and you smoothly look back,
    one wink of your eye took me way back.
    That magic tune starts to play,
    you're slowely fading away.
    everybody rise and face the door.
    I stand and take a deep breath hoping there's no one behind the door.
    There she goes walking past me
    unaware of the chemistry that went through you and me.
    She makes her way and you gladly take her hand,
    but I'm happy because she has a good man.
    I start to visualize all our happy times
    as I close my eyes I feel your friendly kiss one last time.
    Wedding vowels exchange and the rings do too.
    I wish it was me standing next to you.
    In no time you give her that kiss,
    a kiss of pure eternal wedding bliss.
    The two of you turn to the crowd and grip each others hand.
    You come closer and I come into view,
    you smile and I smile, but my love for you, you had no clue.
    You walk past me and I wipe my tears as I wave good-bye, I wave good-bye to my bestfriend :luv:
     
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    I feel you all the way on this one
     
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    Many times we allow the one we love, to walk away. Allowing another individual to fall in love with them. They give their heart to them when we truly desire to have their heart for ourself. People often say when you fall in love with a best friend it will never work. I feel your best friends knows you better then all and that is the type of love that could last. I feel you! I allowed my best friend to walk out of my life and he was the one I loved. True love has found me and true love will find you.
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay jerseyy22 :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Have I already welcomed you??? :) I don't remember ...

    but I do remember that I've never read this peace before ...

    Guuuuuuuuuuurl !!! You said so much in this peace! I don't think
    I kooda attended this wedd'n ... shoot ... find da bride :uzi:
    in her dress'n room or sump'n ... :nuts: ...

    Nawwwwwww ... just kidd'n yall ... :angel1:

    Great Peace. Thanks for sharing and joining us.
    Please make yourself at home ... because you are.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    This reminded me of my "Neglected Love Series" in the short story forum...I love this piece...Looking for you to bless us with more.
     
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