Black Poetry : My best friend..My sister

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Full of life you wasnt ready to go

    Growing in her own..
    My best friend
    My sister…
    Beautiful…..
    I don’t understand
    As much as I try
    I cry
    And cry
    My sister the pain burns deep
    For he didn’t have to
    With a blink of an eye
    He took your life….
    My sister…..
    I know your in heaven
    And I feel your presence
    But your life was precious
    You meant a lot to so many
    A mother
    A daughter
    A sister
    An a friend
    And he took it all away….
    My sister
    Best friends
    You saw one you saw the other
    No one can compare
    Momma said we were a pair.
    Through thick and thin
    Then he came…
    Took your life like it was nothing
    The walls are closing in
    Inches away from losing my mind
    As I try to get pass the pain
    The hurt…of losing you
    It’s been 13 years…
    And nothing faded…
    Heart still half empty
    As I hold on to
    Your memory close
    It was always you and I
    Now it’s just me…
    It’s hard you was the one
    I could always trust
    Lost in my slumber
    Wishing I could just talk
    To you today.

    Dedicated

    (c) 2004
    untitled life
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! this was so heart felt and deeply expressed
    i'm in a hush ...well done sistah da emotions rolled here
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich, she been on my mind for a while
    just thought i write on it, and release

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooh too beautiful!
     
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    this was beautiful and heartwrenching...
    the pain of losing someone is a pain
    that never seems to dissipate but
    with time we come to appreciate
    what they were to us and the joy
    they brought to our lives...
    when we were blessed with them...
    that is something the pain can
    never take away...

    Much luv to you sister...
    this was felt...
     
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    Sometimes something as simple as a song will remind us of a loved one who has passed on. This was an emotive write, well felt and heard. I'm sure your sister felt it too somehow.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for your comments and support
    and love...
    Peace Angel
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, this touches me deeply. What a beautiful release, sister. Thank you for sharing, and much love and peace to you.
     
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    Reply to Mzblkangel

    Mzblkangel, First I want to extend my condolences
    Bad actors create terrible consequences
    Now I reveal my sensitive side to you
    Your poem made my tears become to my face morning dew


    Great poem you have made
    Please go and seize the day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
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    Deep emotions pour from your soul, thick like sunday morning syrup
    head spinnin so fast you cant see where your next step will be
    wishing you could go back in time and erase events that took you to the point
    of WHY.

    Im feeling you more than you know trust me heart felt flow that I feel you on keep it flowing with the talent God gave you to let go the pain.

    And remember Our time ain't God's time and in time....we will all meet at that
    Great family reunion
    Peace!
     
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