Black Poetry : ...My Beauty...?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jan 25, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been told my beauty
    can't represent me truly
    been through hell and back
    inside sickness without lack
    i've been told its unbelievable
    how i can still seem believable?
    though cancer lives in me
    to taunt and come to kill me
    i've been told i am so beautiful
    inside and out so beautiful
    but what exactly is true beauty?
    when your body feels so dreary?.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' how i feel u on this
    yet in the worthy eyes
    he so knoweth thy beauty
    forth da body of dreary feeling
    under thy faith he so feel u

    it all will be .........get fully well
    nice to read u again
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True beauty radiates from within regardless. Hugs to you.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments....:)
     
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