Black Poetry : my bad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my latest poems from this weekend

    My bad

    Dog did it hurt with yo **** in the dirt
    Magnum is all ya worth, I know it hurt

    Sorry, do yourself a favor, go play Atari
    U got a Buick, my mind is thinking Ferrari

    Get yo mind correct, get rejected
    Madtv, low expectations why you getting disrespected

    A low expectation gets you low aspirations
    Popped the trunk on my portfolio and boyz started gyrating

    Tricks up my sleeves, but no company shirt
    Use the vp like he use me and then downsize his mind in the dirt

    Truths hurt, true pimps sharing skirts
    Knock off documents from the office like Microsoft works

    They didn’t get it burned digitally so I write a new cd
    See me, stop sucking up to the vp, now that’s a suv

    You are a utility to be used as the rich men’s vehicle
    Question is, who is he, that be, driving the hums of those to the v?

    Do you agree, do you have no options to this balla blockin?
    You got a box, a cutter, a location empty, are you stocking

    Merchandise, me and her won’t chant on our dreams of dice
    Fillet-min yon, **** spelled it wrong, just like typing a wrong price

    Would skip and repeat bars, and stanzas
    I’m trying not only to write but to press stanzas

    The message write their in the stanza line
    Stand in line, skipped to my time, my prime in standard time

    Modern day

    Copyright Daniel Davis 03
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed your poem
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u pose a flow untouched
    i like how dis was crafted
    flow on
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep...nice and tight. i really liked it.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    da beatz R vibratin off dis heat ;) lol :)