Black Poetry : my baby momma

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Baby Momma

    Gotta, got to, gotta go grind like thawed chicken
    Got me behind like a technological city and country livin
    City livin got me stuck in traffic
    My seed bleed its hind reeds, call em lil bastard

    Grown men cry in the heat of the night
    Tibbs looks for answers in the heat of the night

    Fighting for what’s real, the only one I know
    A child needs a father, but some women don’t really know

    Gotta, got to, gotta go grind like girts and butter
    My idea of a family is not knowin the whereabouts of my son’s mother
    This life is drama, hated by my baby mama
    One breakdown from a buspass, she’s a pint of oil from a hummer

    Child support is killing me, is it even going towards the kid
    Ya dig, how many joys it brings me to wipe his face with his bib

    Fights with the ex, her boyfriend and I got plex
    No love, a imitation of respect, just wanna knife her neck

    Gotta, got to, gotta go, grind like beef stew
    Wished I were a viagra patient, dick shouldna grew
    Spit it back in, to escape the attorney general and is prison of lashings
    The more I get, they more they take from my mashings

    The general don’t feel the cost of these pallets of cereal
    At my house its parade sugar, hers is imperial

    Pure cane starving marvin, trying to rebuild my foundation
    I’m only one of a million broken parts in this auto-nation

    Can’t rewind in reverse, reverberate slow and rebuild relationships
    The essence of this young black man is a broken ship



    copyright Daniel Davis
    "Tainted Platinum"
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    flow on...nice one here
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all dis here str8 tyte off da hook drop
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the neverending saga...
    of the baby mamma drama
    it's unfortunate the system
    is designed only to cater
    to the mother...in some
    ways it's cool in other ways
    it could stand to be reviewed...

    this work came with the realness...
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, you really slammed this one, hard. Keep those words flowing.
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop, this was nice. I was feelin' it. You really put it down folk.
     
  7. j'hiah

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    this piece- overlooked.
    baby mommas- overbooked
    system has his shoulder hooked like a puppet- systematic 2 steppin'
    treating you like the colder crook..
    **** gets horrific
    when they treat you like a statistic
    and less realistic..
    when baby mamas cause drama and you feel safer
    living next door to Osama
    but anyway...
    things like hiding a child from a dad and putting him in the presence of a
    stranger is kind of sad
    but let it be known
    that one day- your child shall be grown
    and when time has flown pass the times you have missed
    into those days where your presence will be kissed by her,
    that broken ship will be a blur,, a sunk memory
    as God, who is a Father, will give you your rights
    though the system is not right
    and your green is kinda light from the "child support"...
    keep your head up
    God is getting fed up with wicked baby mamas..
    but please love her although it's hard...
    she has whole deck... but you have the winning card.
     
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