Black Poetry : My Baby Daddy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ASHANTA, Jan 25, 2004.

  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Baby Daddy


    When you stepped to me I was your Queen.
    I was the wife without the honor of baring your name.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head on sistah drop it like it's hot
    tyte scribing
     
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    This scribe went from shame to pride, Ilike that, keep flowing.
     
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    I know this first hand, been there, much felt by me, very well told
     
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    ASHANTA,
    Your poem is packed with documentation of crimes that are repeated over and over in our world. May we be blessed to bring them to an end.

    "Never again will I carry the torch without the flame."

    This is the end for one and multilied over and over it reps. the end of it all.

    Peace and Blessing
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes rasheed like a mother to a child even through it hurts,
    you must never give up until the blinders un fold,
    we are rightious people many have been blinded not to see.
    But if you keep repeating it one will be saved.
     
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    I liked the way you lifted yourself from his shameful game and now are able to move on in pride to get your fame!! I've been there and know all too well that it's best to lift ourselves up despite the stress these men bring upon us.

    Thank you for a wonderful but truthful read.
     
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    nice, read someplace else though
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You welcome my sister many of our sisters have went through these struggles, many times we are silent. All black men are not this way thank God. But many try to silence truth.
    I am not a man hater but I have seen and believe me I have felt the scars as my other sisters.
    I went to the search engine and put in angry black men and it brought tears to my eyes to read what many of them think about black sisters. , but it never speaks of how many black men abandit there seeds and blame it on the women. Spineless men who always blame it on the women. Never taking responsibilities for there own off springs.
     
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    A strong Queen needs a true King, not an old boy.

    Completely felt, sister.
     
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