Black Poetry : My baby better make it home tonight

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  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is an old archive piece of mine...But I like it and I need a little help in writing the guys verse...Any takers?

    I swear if my baby don't make it home tonight it's gonna be some str8 up drama, drama...(Spoken)

    Look, your my brother and he's my man
    and I understand that ya'll had plans
    But I got this feelin deep inside
    that my baby won't make it home tonight
    And I know it kills you to see me cry
    So if it's drama promise to keep him in sight
    They ain't strapped? "it's cool", yeah that's what you say
    But I wake up alone, they'll be a price to pay
    You know that's my:heart: and without him I'll die
    And we all know Bonnie ain't **** without Clyde
    Bro you know I'm bout bread as much as the next
    but 10 stacks ain't worth that slug in yo chest
    So tonight I ask ya'll to use ya'll heads
    Cause I swear 'fore God my baby turn up dead
    You know who I'm after, babyboy it's you
    "**** Alize", bump that you know im tru
    So I'm a tell you this just one more time
    When the lick's been pulled, return whats mine
    Cause I love ya'll both and if yall die...
    ****, just make it home tonight
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl this was well felt, well felt.....
    Brought a few memories back
    And a few tears forth....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I hear ya ......whoa !
     
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    fo'sure
    nice rhymin skillz
    i'ma make it home tho'
    one
     
  5. SwtT

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    dang, you put it out there a bit:) I liked this flow:)
     
  6. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Play...I'm glad you was feelin this one!

    $RICH$...cant you help yo sista out?

    SwtT...I put it out there, but that's me...Just keepin it real gurl!

    Locust...you gonna make it home huh? lol great to see you on my pages again boo!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Alize,

    Great flow!! I liked it very much!! I feel you on this!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sierra...I'm glad to see you on my pages again!
     
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    guuuuurrrrl...I felt like i was standin in ya livin room wit this one :)
    liked it :)
     
  10. angelicsage

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    Alize, you came with the "tyteness" on this one...Felt this flow.

    Maad Respect,
    Angelic
     
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