Black Poetry : My Autumn love

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Frozen sap
    icicles lop
    hung drippin
    on maple limbs
    wintery maze
    clear and cold
    bonding in da hub
    together like
    butterflies
    our breath steamy
    as the echos of my
    love drift into
    our deep foreverness
    sugar sweet as we
    partook of this gift
    at da snow bank of
    our compassion
    our lip torn on da
    frosty treat of nature
    menu of love holding
    the lavender bliss to
    a feverish desire of
    me and u
    been so long i await u
    now today has come
    in the wintery season

    just as the moon need the sun
    we should be as one in hope of
    a divine eternal massive journey
    inside our very exsistance
    da rotation is evidence found as
    it surface in a motion completely
    i discovered u at the edge with
    this autumn glow and brilliant
    eyez of radiance speaking of a
    enchating , enhance , endearing
    love glisting that reflects my
    face ur breath taking and the blow
    in the wind as your hair float a gusty
    aroma of beauty my beloveth
    balancing and aligning our fate ur
    my AUTUMN SPLENDOR OF LOVE !
    :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :blowkiss:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wheeeew ok now...you got me and all my attention

    very warmly posed and full of love

    as if it spoke to me in the wind i go

    very loving scribe of a true love found indeed....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat nothing better in the winter then warm lovin
    and cuddling bodies of two lovers under fireplace
    thankz Angel for the love on this cold night !
     
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    This was like a breath of crisp autumn air, perfect for snuggling and cuddling within. Very warm write my brotha.
     
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    thankz tru indeed warm and fuzzy just what i love in the winter
    anybody wanna join me at the fireplace of warm love !
     
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    Oh i see you go tthat little :grin: in ya huh?:lol:

    your welcome this was a great scribe Rich
     
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    so true..loving this poem..yes the chill in the air induce by the autumn can indeed bring an amor of comfort.... :hearts2:


    Peace~N~Love
    Blue
     
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    I'm sure some ladies would like to join you, who are you addressing? Line forming at the right as usual. QQ
     
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    indeed angel the little fire ball in me coming out under da fire place
    u care to join me for a cup of tea !

    Bluewater ....a coat of warmth from two souls touching brings compassion
    and a beautiful moment together when it's chilly at night i got the fire place
    ready and cozzy care to join me for tea lady

    watz i see a few to my right as i cross in flyte to da fire place
    where i trace with sweet embrace care to join me for da night
    as i set the hot mood right lady !

    Thank u all for the warm love on this chilly bliss whewwwwwwww!!!!
     
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    "My Autumn Love" is wonderful.

    Like the wonderment you bring.
     
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