Black Poetry : (my Apologies)...........the End

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    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sound of your voice~
    ....So non-impassionata
    Made it clear to me~
    ....That my presence was persona-non-grata
    Apparent(now)wasted effort, time and expenditures on you~
    ....Is something that I am unwilling to continue to do
    It's just that I wish love's blinders~
    ....Had not obstructed my view!

    I would've seen month's ago that there was a him & you~
    ....And it would not have been so difficult
    To accept..that, although we never really got to start~
    ....Except for some futile..non encouraged attempts on my part
    I recognize now that whatever it was(n't) is now over
    ....Eventually, my bruised love chamber will recover
    Perhaps..as a consequence, I wouldn't be feeling so light in the
    wallet~
    ....Moreover..maybe I wouldn't feel so HEAVY in my HEART!!!!

    ........................SAARONCROWELL............................

    The above excerpt was given to me by a fellow poet that I was
    having a conversation with..the subject being, the proper way to
    apologize or be apologized to..as well as the fact that one of the
    two of you, either the apologizer or the apologizee..may have
    misunderstood something said or done..thereby bringing about
    the need to apologize. At the time we were both listening to
    LIVING COLOUR'S TIMES UP CD..cut #4.(How scary that turned
    out to be.) Anyway it doesn't apply to anyone in particular (at
    least for me) and I thank him profusely for the present!!*
    *ps...Doc I see that you're posting material again...give me a call
    or e-mail me. I need your insight on something. merci beaucoup.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Saaron,

    Kewl read bro!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man

    tyght song u sing:heart:
     
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    humility

    this piece gives me the feel of a person who knows that there is a problem and wants to keep peace.
    therefore, apologizing for the other person's misdeed, etc.
    however, if the other party(ies) involved had a backbone, they would be doing the writing instead.
    very hot piece.
    has a melodic flow....
     
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