Black Poetry : my apologies - my misery

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bahati, Jul 3, 2003.

  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    sweet sweet loving
    WHY DOES IT HURT SO BAD
    my cherished friend
    HOW COULD I LEAVE YOU WITH WOUNDS SO DEEP
    everything we had
    WHY DID I THROW IT ALL AWAY
    seemed so perfect
    IF IT HADN'T BEEN ME
    we could be together for eternity
    NEGLECTED YOUR NEEDS
    though you anticipated my every wish
    WAS SO SCARED
    with all the feelings so intense
    TRIED TO RUN AWAY
    you'd find me anywhere
    WHY COULDN'T I ACCEPT THESE FEELINGS
    and simply appreciate
    NOW I'M LOST
    LOST YOU
    SOLITUDE
    EMPTINESS
    DESERT
    WASTELAND IS MY HEART
    no other man will ever stand a chance
    in the light of your presence
    DOWN ON BENDED KNEES
    NO PRIDE LEFT
    BEGGING FOR A SECOND CHANCE
    OR THIRD OR HUNDREDTH
    CREEPING
    your delicious love
    in my dreams at night
    at day
    at any time
    everlastingly
    OH
    HEARTACHE IS MY ONLY COMPANION
    IN THESE DULL SAD DAYS
    TEARFUL, MOANFUL
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow...i like it alot..
     
  3. MORE

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    deep like the ocean......nice piece.....:toast:
     
  4. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY NICE. MADE ME THINK OF THE SAYING.. MISS YOUR WATER WHEN THE WELL GOES DRY. Dreams do keep people close.
     
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