Black Poetry : My Angel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Apr 22, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we met online a couple of yrs ago.
    used 2 stay talkin n laughin 4eva,
    from there it progressed...
    ur feelins 4 me, u did confess.

    u wanted 2 make me more than a friend,
    but i knew u were 2 special right then.
    i always kept u close to my heart, knowing
    u would never break it.

    u told me about ur gurl problems n i
    wanted 2 rescue u from it all. u didnt
    deserve what was thrown ur way. i
    didnt know what 2 do, all i could say
    was "maybe u wouldnt b goin through this, if
    i was w/u." i wanted u 2 have a smile on ur face,
    forget all those gurls who stole ur heart away.

    then u left 4 the army n my heart dropped.
    i prayed 4 u everynite, couldnt cope w/the possibility
    of u not comin back.
    that would rip me apart.

    u told me u always loved me n remembered the
    1st n only time we kissed........
    ****, what bliss n boy it was the ****.
    u stroked my ego n still do.....
    know how 2 make me feel good when im down n blue

    ur my angel in disguise.......
    u blessed me w/the privilege 2 b ur daughters godmom.
    remember, ill always love u.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm likin' this...the style is different and the situation is beautiful...good job...
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the props........wasnt 2 sure about it....glad 2 giva ya a good read.......1
     
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    Hey that was awe-some, beautifully written...
     
  5. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Dream Weaver...... i try my best :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like dis especially since i can relate to it in ol so many ways i like yo style keep flowin cuz it makes me smile :)
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx serenti-poet........much appreciated.........next time give every1 a chance to read ur great works.......much love :)
     
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