Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Angel in Disquise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, May 31, 2008.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How could I be so blind

    How could I

    Like a horse being led to water with blinders on

    blinders on

    My eyes only saw what they seen

    I wanted to believe this was it

    You were it

    You said all the right things

    Said all the right things

    Made me once again love again

    Love again

    Big eyes open wide shut

    Wide shut

    I couldn't see you for what you are

    Signs were there in Neon lights

    But still I ignored

    I just didn't and couldn't believe you were a wolf in sheep clothing

    The way you smiled at me

    Your so call attentive nature

    was a lie

    A lie

    and now I'm stuck with these mixed up feelings over you

    You

    You

    I had given you more than I had given anyone else

    You like a bloodhound sniffed out Good Nature

    and you ran with it

    Ran with it

    Now for my blindness even tho' God was showing me you

    I chose to do things my way

    My way

    and my way has gotten me

    Homeless, no jobs, and a sense of failure

    All because I chose to remain blind to whom you really are

    I have noone to blame but myself

    Myself, all by myself

    All by myself

    As the tears of shame rains down upon my face

    I see the look of hopelessness on yours

    Your hopeless, and I quilty

    Your honor throw away the key

    For I am quilty for loving a man that was not right for me

    once again

    Once again

    Once again

    Forgive me my little ladies for Mama never meant to bring you down

    But she only wanted us to come up

    Come up

    Come up

    I must regroup

    I must get away

    I must leave behind this man who is and will always be

    "THE ANGEL IN DISQUISE"......



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    Lavette112
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the pain and disappointment in this piece. Sometimes the dishonesty is clear to most, but not to the person being lied to.. Other times, which seems like the case here, the person is a master of disguise, and wears that mask well. Strong expression here poetess.
     
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    feeling you here ....time for a change and open one's eyes bring it back home to me .

    love your expression here sis.
     
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    NEVAR

    This flow is so touching

    Let go of the guilt
    You need have none

    You gave, it all
    You worked with what was put up and said

    So if you have no ties,
    Open up your eyes and travel to a new place.
    Get a new start
    Try a new way

    Sacrifice for those you love
    Your babies

    Those you love beyond your blood need to be
    Double checked!


    True blue can stand the heat


    Trust your heart
    Don't harden it
    Don't change how you share
    For the one you really need will see
    They will care.

    Pretend you’re from Missouri
    The SHOW ME STATE
    Make them show they care and are aware of your needs

    Break the chain
    Take out your scissors
    Cut the string and let that balloon go

    Users make me sad for they are sad indeed.
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEW WEE!!!

    It took me a mminute to get to this write. First of all, Hodee, your reply was off the meat rack. I can't think of a better way to tell a woman how to get over someone that's not right for them. It's that simple move on!!! Nevar, my heart goes to you and your children (if this is based on a real story... and somehow I feel it is). You're so beautiful and you seem to be a god-fearing woman, how could this happen? Well, we all should "double-check what we're getting into. Make sure you are compatible on CERTAIN levels including emotionally, spiritually, socially, and not just finacially and physically (which is the trap of the world- good looks and big money)!!! I send my best wishes and I hope you find your knight!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    beautiful piece

    almost as beautiful as u...

    no worries.. u r another man's treasure..........
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    wow

    sis what can i say

    but i do know patience is hard

    especially when you have people who are not out for your best interest

    peace and power

    your strength is unquestioned
     
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    That angel in Disquise
    was not.
    Open your eyes
    And see
    Agels fill you life
    with love
    It stays there
    it Lays there
    it Lives

    One to cry your eyes
    was not there
    In Disguise
    But, waiting for your Surpires
    Waiting to see you cry
    but Don't
    Because your Agel is there
    And Know he still cares
    One to see you fall
    One that gives you ALL

    Don't fret
    No Worries
    He appears in time
    Not the one to hrt you
    But the Beautiful
    Angel to dry your Eyes
     
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