Black Poetry : MY Addiction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Defiantson, Mar 31, 2006.

  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Since sprint is here and the feel for love is strong. I just wanted to add something I usually don't do. A love poem.

    My addiction


    It’s like you’re an addition
    That keeps my mind concentrated on you
    The mire thought of you
    Has me fantasying
    Dreaming of ways
    Just to touch you
    And as my appetite increases
    I can feel you next to me

    Your slightest touch
    Sends me into convulsion
    And the way your tongue moves
    Across my manhood
    You have me moaning
    Like you are the only one
    I have ever been with
    Not even God can touch my soul
    The way you have

    And the way your hands
    Caress my chest
    I can feel the energy
    That flows though your finger tips
    Which send me to a state
    Where passion rules
    And every way
    That we make love
    Would not be pervaded

    The way our lips connect
    And our tongues combine
    Send me into a state
    Where the universe
    Feels like it’s mine
    And I get mesmerized
    By the way
    Your lips touch mine
    And at that point in time
    We both lose our heads
    And start thinking about
    Each other as one

    And the way you move
    When our bodies interlock
    Has me yearning for you
    In a way that only you
    Could imagine
    It’s like we both
    Move to the same rhythm
    Of the same beat
    Of the same song
    At the exact moment
    When we combust
    With explosions
    Inside of us

    This is what you do to me
    It’s like an addiction
    And I am getting high
    Off of your drug
    Each time
    We spend time
    Together
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the warmth of spring and the love afloat
    very sweet release...............................
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I must say spring has bought some beautiful things to bloom. I am loving the piece thank you for sharing you softer side with us.

    Smooches!!!
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks both of you....
     
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    ooooo weeeeeeeee d you got it going on. when are you going to read to me again. would love to hear you soon.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heck naw my bratha that was hott... i feel the mami heat...lol
    but dat was a tight and luvin flo u had goin on, so flo on wit nonstop

    blackluv and bp
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww.... you two are to sweet
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to everyone who actually took the time out to respond to my poems.
     
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