Black Poetry : My addiction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hisili, Oct 31, 2004.

  1. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No matter how hard I try
    I'm never going to forget you
    No matter how much I try to hate you
    I still love you
    You stay on my mind
    Even when I'm with someone else
    Never find the words to say to you
    Because you take my breathe away
    No one will ever feel for you like I do
    Pretend like im in love
    But still loving you
    and never stopped
    and never will....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime love can take one deeper then anyone can feel
    this was deep and tyte i feel ya on this .....flow on tell it all
     
  3. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearthis: Unfortunately, theres no rehab designed for this type of addiction,
    Its one habbit that only time can break. I loved this piece and your flow..."KEEP EM COMIN C"...1 :hearts2:
     
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    This is a painful place to be, and you expressed it so very well.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you express this well
    love have away wit ya indeed
    nice drop...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it's like that, a love you feel that you can never quite let go of completely. Eventually, it will feel differently, intense love will fade to simply caring. Well felt piece.
     
  7. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea this love still hasnt faded... I wrote this 3yrs ago and yea this same gurl still got me trippin tryna work through it tried being mad at her... iono bout this one maybe a lil more tyme will help, appreciate tha appreciation
     
  8. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like it

    Itz just like u r talking instead of me!I wanna say it to someone really special to me!Luv ain't right,luv is...foolishness!We can't understand it!It comes as it goes,sometimes without any real reason!
    Be blessed
    Really epic
     
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    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feel well. You put into words the addiction felt by all at one time or another.
     
  10. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad glad yall queen and Lloyd feel me
    I poured my soul into this and I prolly cried a lil too
    sumtimes I read this and memba how ez it iz to fall 4 sumone
    no doubt there was sumthin special bout her but not 4 me.... mad luv 2 fellow poets -1-
     
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