Black Poetry : ~~~My Addiction~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This addiction...
    This need,
    This want
    consumes me like a single lick
    of fire against dry wood.

    .........................raging
    ..............................flames
    ...................deep in
    ............me

    my soul whispers and the masses hear.
    I'm going under completely.

    The undertow
    catches me off guard like
    the sweet and bitter taste
    of cocaine to the tip of my tongue,
    Haitian Angel dust to my nostrils
    Puff and in an instant
    I’m on fire by the simple thought of you.
    A human bloodhound...catching your
    sent in the air.

    The sound of my
    blood pulsing in my ears...
    stepping outside of my addiction,
    glancing at myself.
    expanding and soaking you up like a
    sponge.

    This addiction,
    This need,
    This want
    has me spinning...
    your essence feels so dayum good
    to me!

    Copyright 2004
    "Son of the DayStar" Publishing
    "Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit!"
     
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    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    was this the inspiration for angel dust? ...I really enjoyed readin. The flames in depth made it hot for me....and that is wonda-ful. thanks for sharing

    blessins'
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes to a degree it was indeed the inspiration for Angel Dust. Thank you so much for your love. Blessings.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! this one took me under and back like the twin of angel dust
    tyte drop
     
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    Freakin awesome, baby.
     
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    Intoxicated by a love, feeling this deep poet, you don't miss a beat do you?
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you pa. I'm blessed to have you in my life.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gemp. You make me feel so high and beautiful
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL I try not to miss a beat ma. Thank you muchly
     
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    Now that's some raw, unabridged addiction...
    written at it's best... :smokin:
    those lines went straight to the chest...
    Awesome


    Pay the love forward :wink:
    ~~Sage~~