Black Poetry : My Addiction…Is there a support group for this? PART II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Oct 28, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG :eek:
    OMG :eeek:

    O M G :jawdrop:
    A PART 2!!!!!
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    O SISTER!!!!!!!!!!!! This was :great: & :terrific: in every sense of the words i mean that lil smilie couldnt clap long enuff lol. I love when the words move you because its like you melt into them. Your essence embraces it and your entire SPIRIT becomes poetry and its a beautiful sight to see. :cry: hehehe lol Sister...may we never know life without the manifestation of you and your heart...otherwise known as...the PERFECTION of POETRY

    :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific:
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pure awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! indeed a support group forming
    love the taste of this piece ....wow!!!! SAGEEEEE!!!!!!!
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gifted!

    You are truly gifted! I love the passion and fire you have. This is truly a fantastic! awsome! terrific! great! mindblowing piece! I absolutely love it! Flow on! is not even enough to say right here. It's not strong enough! Maybe write on! express on! I don't know just keep on! that's it! keep on!
     
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    :welldone: :great: :great: :great: :great: :great:

    My wonderful Sista Sage! Your talent is immesurable. I can :swim: in your words for days.
     
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    Nah, no support group for this sis, you'll just have to muddle through some how, until you get the hookup....(oh no she didn't)....Tee Hee....Seriously though, the description in this is so intense, capturing the ache of a love so good it hurts. Keep flowing poet, keep flowing.
     
  7. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...!

    This piece is absolutely Phenomenal...I mean what more can i say except..."Keep Em Comin"...1 :great: :ilu: :great: :ilu:
     
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    your the best

    sweet torment, passions unfolds to
    Create me a memory so deep and so fierce
    That you make all my other thoughts become quite scarce.

    Masterfully erasing, inhibitions escaping
    Penetration, moans escaping
    The culmination of our desire
    An erotic aroma floats
    Through the electric air
    The light from 12 candles
    Dance in sensual shadows

    your words are soft, compelling
    and intelligently sensual
    a gift from the soul of a real poet
    And it does'nt help
    That my vibe leaves its impressions
    On your vaginal walls
    Like i were writing my name
    In graffitti.... knowing that its hard to erase
    all watched as our love
    Draged its footprints across the forums sky
    We became morning after dreams,
    Waking up drunk on poetry.

    a baptism
    in the essence of our love
    shall empower us
    invoking orgasmic verbs
    And nouns
    Dream me within the chance of your embrace,
    within the algorithm of a complex but solvable formula.
    ...I am your soulmate
    and i too am addicted,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hookup :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    Good lord, sister, you could write a poem about a pile of dog doo and make it sound like the best dang thing in the world. :teach: What can I say about this? It's straight up awesome. But I expected that.
     
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    wow, masterpiece sage whew
     
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