Black Poetry : My 1st attempt at...Haiku

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Afridancr, May 15, 2001.

  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Understand Body

    Passion's Bloodline overflows

    Cardiac arrest
     
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    alright!!!! I like this one....;)
     
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    Afri,

    Queen, as I said before, this is MARVELOUS...get yo' Haiku oN SISTER!

    ONE LOVE,BLAK
     
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    A breath
    thats what comes to mind for some reason, I love this !!!!!!
    ~breathing~~~
     
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    felt this Afridancr!

    you go gurl !!!!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cheezin

    Destee~ I like it when you feel me...no puns intended!!!:laugh:
    I'm goin gurl!!:heart:

    Natasha~Just keep breathin sis!!!;)

    blak~I always look forward to your replies! Haiku~Haiku on baybay!!:D

    Bishop~Glad you liked this one!!;)
     
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    Expansion of Afri!!!!

    I likes!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    I humbly thanks you from the bottom of my :heart: !
     
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    arrested...

    horizontally stirred...
    by overflowing passions
    understanding.

    do this.
     
  10. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller

    You've got me smiling profusely!!!:D

    thank you sweetie!;)
     
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