Black Poetry : My 10th Grade Project On Compare & Contrast

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  1. true love

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    Subject #1
    His kisses are sweet
    Full of love when we meet
    Some say, "I miss you."
    Other's simply say, "Let me kiss you."
    As he takes me in his arms so gently
    Warmly
    Snuggling me to his chest
    Kissing me tenderly
    As I rest
    My hand on his shoulders
    He becomes bolder
    Teasing me a little with his tongue
    Caressing each light brown curl
    I'm feeling like the most beautiful girl
    To ever have graced his world
    And his massive hands take long strokes
    Down the center of my back up to the front of my throat
    Just to hold me down and in place
    So he can continue to taste
    The sweet juices that two love nest make
    When they come together
    And partake
    In the sweetest conversation

    Subject #2
    His kisses run deep
    Like hot chocolate they seep
    Under my skin
    Into my bones
    Riding blood cells to every
    Inch of my dome
    Hands caressing and exploring like mad
    Like crazy
    My world is becoming dark and hazy
    And I feel my heart cease to beat
    There's tingling going on in my feet
    My lips are going numb
    And I'm dumb
    To my surroundings
    There's a consistent pounding
    In my ears
    And I feel him shift gears
    From lips to neck
    And I lean forward just to give and to get
    Better access to lips against flesh
    Study hard and pay close attention because there will be a test
     
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    Passion 101 in session...

    Give me a lot of homework, please, I need some extra credit.

    Do your thing.
     
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    LOL LOL LOL :teach: Are you sure you can handle so much work, Positive? LOL Much love to you!
     
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    I'm very studious... just loooove reading... & hands on is how I learn... :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    class in order let me have da work page & load
    i want it all to pass in da spring !
    tyte flowin
     
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    LOL Positive! Hands on definitely makes the learing process a lot easier!
     
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    LOL, Thanks $$RICH$$..much love!!! :luvv:
     
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    teach me truelove teach me !!!..........lol
    most welcome sistah
     
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    Liked the concept of this scribe, keep flowing.
     
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