Black Poetry : Mutual

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 26, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To put it nice and sweet so you understand
    you my dear are no longer my man
    and in the grand scheme of things you never were
    Because frankly you never knew who you were
    It's a shame that you don't have anyone to blame for me
    being gone
    And that's truth
    Since I believe in you and I think you can be better
    I'll make you look good
    Just this one time and say that this break up was...
    Mutual



    Yes yes I put you out there and I hope you don't dare try to change the story.
    In the event that you do try
    I warn you You don't want to see my poetic wrath. :whip:
     
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    Hi soulful
    digging how you drop this here
    yes indeed
    you put it out there
    in a very nice poet form
    ending it with a *warning*
    keep the flow flowing

    Peace and Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now , look out for the warth of ya pen
    whewwwwwwwwww!!!! mutual
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I decided to let the other side of the pen be seen with this one.
    It isn't something that I do often but I did this time just to let a
    certain someone know what's going down.
     
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    surely it was heard loud and clear
    vent on .....................................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Directly put, loud and clear poet. Flow on.
     
  7. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for appreciateing the angry side of the pen as well as the softer side.

    The only way to see the light is to also see the darkness that you must encounter first.
     
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    whoa...i'm scared of you...
    good scribe nicely put...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx just a little catwoman coming through in me that's all.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second Khasm you bad!!!
     
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