Black Poetry : Mutual feelings….?

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What am I trying to say?
    Why can’t I get “it” out?
    The feelings I have,
    Our inexpressible.

    Although the side effects of “this” feeling are well known
    But have been lost for some time

    It seems as though you have come to return “it” to its rightful owner
    But what I ask is…

    How did you know “that” was to belong to me?
    **** to be real I never knew that I had lost “it”

    Anyway I am glad you are here and have brought “it” with you
    But now that I have “it”

    How do I go about making “it” true for you and me?

    Although you seem to have “it” with you
    "It" did not originate from your heart

    You can’t help the fact that I am feelin’ you
    so
    ****
    hard

    You brought back to me this feeling
    That I hadn’t felt in a long time

    But I guess what I need to know now is


    Did you lose something?

    If so

    I think I have “it”
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE HOOK

    Boss *** hook, ladybug. I'm diggin' it!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ladybug gurl u drop a masterful flow here
    yeap! i did do u really have it ?
     
  4. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love......it is always soooo appreciated
     
  5. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet, ladybug, this was smooth and filled with the conflicted emotions new lovers often feel before they even realize they have something going on. I can relate so well to this piece, unfortunately I have had to tell their ***** to take "it "back....lol.....no, I should hope that it----the real love stays. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with Legacy21...lovin the feel here...
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww i loved ..............."IT""

    peace liberty!
     
  8. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you all enjoyed "it" ......much love to all of you
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladybug!

    Im lovin it sis!

    Reas
     
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