Spoken Word : MUST BE CRAZY

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  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ©Must be crazy


    You must be crazy
    Got me waiting
    For your…. tired frustrated hesitating, bursting over with lazy.non-stimulating
    Heart breaking conversation
    Yet I’m waiting

    For you to speak to me-
    Without …tell- tell memories of what your life used to be
    Before “she”
    Destroyed the man you wanted to be…
    Leaving me with….
    Washed and dried, faded - jean eyes
    Pockets hanging out,
    Holes in places they shouldn’t be.
    Left over conversations for me.

    Must be crazy- got me waiting
    Holding on to some back in the day song
    That you played one night for me-
    Fake *** therapy
    From some played out winning ***** *** song singing used to be
    Was all you could share with me?©


    Got me Waiting-
    ahhhh-ight den

    Written By: Tia Williams​
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :uzi: go ahead, girl! You are doing it with this one. I can relate. Felt like I wrote it myself. :x:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice love to have heard this in a wave ......

    we mostly use this to add voice waves of flow
    in spoken word .
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Beautiful_by_me

    This piece is very nice.

    We'd love to hear you read it to us in voice chat. Come and check us out.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice piece...the flow of it was great, thanks for sharing this.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: What did you say about setting yourself on fire:hot:????

    I'm just trying to let it BURN.

    :heart: Thanks for the LUV :heart:
     
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    i love it, love it, love it, he got you waiting, the ending is twisted is oh so beautiful.............continue.......... :star:
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: Lilcherry76..would have loved to do this in voice...but I'm not that computer literate....so...I just type...But I do thank you for the love :thanks:
     
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    I think it was real good ,very complex :wink: good job4navy
     
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    Compassion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flamet: Many of days- I see you loud and clear. :rolleyes: Onward and UPward...

    Peace!
     
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