Black Poetry : Musique de mon Coeur

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 10, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sing for we
    in the morning
    because you love
    'us' music

    ~i hover over body
    perfect, sleeping
    warm from all
    the love in
    we ~ impatiently
    awaiting the
    first glimmer
    of light to receive
    its sparkle
    from your luminous eyes~

    i love we
    in the morning
    because you bring
    'us' poetry like
    multi-colored
    tapestry

    u be my
    sweetest ecstasy

    i pray for we
    in the morning
    that God bless
    we with 'us' music

    Alyce, 2001
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This speaks beauty.... spring time, comfort filled beauty...

    Thanks sis,

    8th!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MS A....

    ahhh... the music of your heart...

    thank you for sharing the rhythms & beats! :)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love

    reading about it~ you have his music morning, noon, and in the middle of the night. I see you smiling, thinking, lucky 'us'. :D

    Scribe sis A!

    T
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    visions of

    your dawn are always splendid. The way you articulate makes a brotha wish he COULD participate.

    Whatever makes you smile, Ms. A., is beginning to be aight wit me! (and so is he) :wink:

    One love,

    saleem
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just...

    just beautiful alyce
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    we thank you! :heart: :heart:

    A
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen to your heart gurl....

    It makes gooood music ;)

    Beautiful A

    *keep-the-beat*
     
  9. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to make an addendum

    to a response I posted to one of your other scintillating flows...I had stated "how you touch this man"...

    let the record show it's so much reciprocity with you...two..so permit me to submit:

    "and HOW he touches you". Only a two-way experience can produce the poetry you do! :wink:

    Peace

    CELA
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet

    This piece rings sweet music in my ears!!!
    Just lovely!:)