Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Jun 27, 2011.
lovely written and heard upon da mental .
yes...there is that part of me that only you can soothe.
may i have a totalview...of you?
beautiful art work you be dishing out on the playground here.
me likes that
Dear heart baller,
This isn't the first time you've opened your umbrella of caring to cover my head when it was storming. Right now my heart is closed for repairs and restoration. The NO VACANCY sign is on (Well, the "O" is burnt out" but...) When the restoration is complete... I will erect a shrine in a special place in my heart and keep an eternal flame lit for you, my friend. Thank you. I am honored (smile) Peace be with you.
Honestly, my heart went silent reading this...so much reverence for the art of love.
This is phenomenal. That silent knowing.
It's such a gift to put this to words....Impressive write.
Brother Poet abstract219,
Honestly, I am more impressed with your comment than I am my own poem. (smile) Thank you kindly, sir.
Thank you, TotalView....(not totally into self-promotion here, but I do have some works posted at Destee. Would love to read your take on them.)
this is absolute beauty! thank you for this exquisite view! wow!
Sister Poet Alyce,
Thank you kindly, sis. Your words have lifted me. Thanks for stopping by and leaving words. (smile)
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