Black Poetry : ~~**Musical Love**~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Aug 31, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm Lawd, seeing you,
    breathing you, and being near you;
    anyone would know that full and
    weighty feelings of affection and
    joyous love-dipped ejaculations always ring
    within me in
    the key of serenity.
    You struck my violin and
    now emotion fills me completely.

    Note to Note we touched
    on time with our own
    undefined rhythm and delicious
    rhyme. You are so succulent and
    fine....like breezy cadences at the
    end of a Gershwin piece;
    a heady and all-consuming jazzy rift
    by Coltrane, sung by Donny Hathaway....

    We sway rhythmicaly, in three/two as
    the key.
    A Rhapsody that's yours and mine.
    Feeling wonderful as I always do,
    making musical love deeply with you.
    Who could possibly guess the
    amount of raw tenderness, that could be
    gleaned from your sweet, sweet melody?

    I pause in my conducting and gather you
    in my bass section moving you along the
    bar lines and measures.
    Your treble to my bass.
    Lips to lips; our song was sung.
    Heart to heart for that special someone.
    Feeling as beautiful as I always do,
    making sweet musical love deeply to you.

    Copyright 2004
    PropheticNsyght
     
  2. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was creative... nice work
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You graced the page with an expressive symphony of words.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed well i could hear a Prince beat in the back as read....flow head on!!!!

    peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome the words of musical strings playing here
    very very nice !!!!