Black Poetry : Music In The Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Aug 12, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~For the Music Man~


    there is music in the rain drops
    and the secret is to listen with your
    eyes closed...

    I love to
    feel the melody in the pitter patter, splashing
    rhythmic measures on my skin

    I lift my face & catch moist love notes; huge droplets
    on my eyelids ...

    there is passion in a rainstorm...
    a symphony of brushing cymbals,
    and piccalos fluttering staccato
    & violins plucking pizzicato
    dancing the cha-cha with me in my bare feet...
    as the water smacks liquid lips upon the earth

    I love to
    hear you with my eyes closed ~ "clean and naked" when it's pouring

    making music with the rain


    a
     
  2. ladyx

    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooh A!

    I love the way you sing! Thank you for sharing the music! :)
    Going to close my eyes next time it rains...so I can hear it too!...

    X
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    play the notes, poet...

    it's raining outside...i've got my eyes closed...smiling.:)

    nice piece of peace.
     
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    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A

    I'm up early in the morning, listening to y'all music!
    (got my eyes closed, too!)

    Maggie
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One Word Alyce....

    YES!!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did u say : piccalos fluttering staccato
    & violins plucking pizzicato .....
    Wor out..
    That was hot...
    loved it!. reminds meof Pyhillis Hyman's song : Rainy day
     
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