Spoken Word : Music in the Making

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Sep 18, 2002.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your eyes as mine
    dark as midnight
    filled with pregnant thoughts, alive
    i smile, you grin
    and caressed my chin
    breath quickened, hearts race
    i long so much to taste
    But you play this erotic game
    stroking and touching
    my hunger pain.

    Your hand on my thigh
    i breathe a sigh
    and moan gently for your skin
    on mine
    oh! sublime
    the rich flavour of your skin
    to cling
    and sing, the song of sin

    Your body calls to mine
    and i watch as you climb
    my everest peak
    as you seek
    the pleasure glow
    your seed to sow
    as bodies flow
    to the ultimate oooh!
    and feel, unexplicably, so
    inspired!
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhh

    very nice flow
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed in da makings of a beautiful flava
     
  4. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for liking the flava!
     
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    Your seem to make love to my soul with the cool breath of ur voice. Excellent flow
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!! that voice + the rhime is like whoa...
     
  7. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gee thanx J'hiah and Infamous,im blushing.
     
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    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sensual. your voice is the perfect muse.
     
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    well writen
     
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