Black Haiku : music in the air

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, May 9, 2011.

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    a child's soft hymn drifts
    east towards mecca, africa
    rising from her throat

    © Kiwanda Paul
     
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    I really love this one wow!!!!


    Unto every beat
    da rhythmized note singing
    on da breath of wind
     
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    I'm glad you love this one. Thank you. But a third thread? It's all I can do to keep up with your poetic genius and energy in the other two...so I am going to kiss your poetic ring, bow (ever so gracefully) and then exit this thread as quickly as possible. <waving> <tripping over my feet>

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    smiles
     
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