Black Poetry : Music for your Soul

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by beautifulblkw, Feb 3, 2009.

  1. beautifulblkw

    beautifulblkw Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    forgive me if i say to much
    but i need to tell u what i want
    the softness of your rough hands
    the harshness in your sweet voice
    this can only mean one thing

    so divine
    u taste like an aged wine
    i'm your softer side of life
    i think i could be your wife
    what you need i'm here to please
    ruff and rugged
    buff and bugging

    the thickness of your smooth arm
    the roughness of your charm
    did you guess by now
    this is a test right now


    i'm tryin to be the music that sooths your soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u say ....hummmm test

    Go head speak from da heart
    this where we begin and start
    U can be that soft muscial note
    sweet melody and tender stroke

    Be the other side of my life
    behold me and love me right
    keep our loyality in sight
    see I need myself a wife

    To display my untouched charm
    a queen to lay upon my arms
    manifest together like liquid dew
    in sweet hush just me and u

    If i'm asking too much
    just forgive me without a bomb rush
    and say yes so we may clutch
    in our cocoon of open trust

    Be my song in my heart
    beyond da test and above da rest
    hear me now feel my confess
    say yes to hear da rest!​

    :qqb023:
     
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    sing your song, then...

    ...coz a soul be heavy...and need a little lifting. in times, good and bad, there's room for a little gifting. sing your song, so soft and mellow...and watch this grown man cry. no, i'm not the sentimental type...it's just that splinter in my eye.:)

    let the river flow.
     
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    beautifulblkw:
    I really dig the way
    you started this joint
    .


    "forgive me if i say to much
    but i need to tell u what i want"


    That's what I'm talkn about let him
    know....how else can you get what
    you want.


    Much Luv
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you can't

    get any realer than this

    i felt the realness

    the openess

    the invitation to love

    appreciate the read

    for real

    :skate:
     
  6. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sweet and so true....

    a rugged lover, need the soft tenderness only a compassionate woman can give. Her sweet affections will indeed be the music to his soul....

    Nice!
     
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    beautifulblkw...

    i'm tryin to be the music that sooths your soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love the whole poem...but.

    Tell him how you feel, with this line alone...how can he refuse.

    it sums it up...


    nicely done.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh, this has this quiet storm, midnight love type vibe.
    :love::love::love:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed like a breeze poetess, nothing wrong with saying exactly what you want, much enjoyed.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Beautiful...

    Being the music to soothe someone's soul is definitely a treasure to hold.

    Nice write!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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