Black Poetry : muse

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Oct 8, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i fell in love with the words you poemized together
    whispered in my ears with hot heavy breath
    i wanted to become a line in one of them
    and have you flow me out of your mouth
    how i loved pretending to be your muse
    when really
    you were mine
    stories created in that small stint of time...
    we told stories while you stroked your way inside
    we never wrote them down
    we never took the time to analyze
    we would brainstorm all the night

    i wanted you to love me to make true love
    but you couldn't
    it was fiction we would write
    so when you said i love you
    i knew it wasn't true
    i found solace in your strong hands rubbing my body down
    massaging away my reality
    and your strong arms that held all of me
    i closed my eyes and you were someone else
    you could save me

    i've come a long way from those past dreams
    the nightmares that later came to be...
    i don't miss you
    i was just remembering a little.
     
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    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every now and again, I have thoughts like those. The good part is that it's just that, thoughts- from the past...

    you've penned them wonderfully,

    enjoyed reading this!
    ~Shani:)
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you shani!! -7:spinstar:
     
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    seven.


    you just been on some otha "ish" for your last
    few posts... & i just wanna tell you... i am diggin'
    it!! all of it!! wit Three **** shovels. :D

    & i loved the way you ended this...
    "i don't miss you
    i was just remembering a little."

    mmm mmm mmm. thanks for sharin'.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne, i have been in another place...
    thanks for the read. i LUV sharing!! -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flower~

    How can you not miss such innocense??? sounds real lovely dear! Regardless, I love what you have done hea... your work is so good!!!

    Reas
     
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    bittersweet...., but allll good....

    very cool :heart:

    alyce
     
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    sometimes, even though we don't want that time to happen again, we still can't help but hold on to some little part of it..like a memory that just won't let go...


    K
     
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    Wildflower 7 - This is just SO GOOD!!!!!!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv y'all. the script gots to be flipped sometimes! -7:spinstar:
     
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