Black Poetry : (Muse) ic

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I walk taking
    the half steps
    on the notes
    of your major
    scale
    and I get stuck
    between the
    3rd, 4th, 7th, & 8th
    tones
    ...Art of muses
    continuous musical
    unification
    You write the
    songs that
    shape my life
    A composition
    accompanied by
    mixed emotions
    to sing an octave
    higher than normal
    as you play the
    right keys ~
    When you open
    the music box of
    my soul
    I become the
    ballerina fond of
    only you - dancing
    gracefully for us
    aesthetically pleased
    with the sounds
    of your being
    in love with me
    and you are
    (Muse)ic to
    my ears ~
    I feel twice
    as many
    (vibe)rations


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES SISTAH!

    Being a music fanatic and a musician myself I REALLY DIGGS THIS PIECE, and the flows is tyght likes dat!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish~

    I was feeling rather melodious when I wrote this piece. Thank you for reading ME sista!
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ballerina of muse(ic) no doubt!!!

    Kicked up mah heels to this piece Queen!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    And I'm still smiling...

    Thanks Boo!
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    sheer artistry!

    Thank you for this peace :)

    A
     
  7. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya flow...

    Melodic!!! :)
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt

    maan, there are oh sooo many guys
    that would LOVE to hear a woman speak like this.
    this piece is intimate and rare -
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Methodically moving my mentals with this here...gotta go get my groove on... :jumping:

    one love,blak
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved it!!... mmm hmmm... dats ryght! :)

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~