Black Poetry : murder, murder, murder and kill, kill, kill

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thou shall not kill
    or thou shall not murder
    so, am i a killer when i eat a burger?
    when i spend money on material things
    am i a splurger?
    further,

    i heard a voice say moo
    was he talking to you
    having nightmares about stew
    ooh, this is new to me
    usually i do
    eat like a carnivore
    more and more until through...

    until cancer turns to Hepatitis
    turns to Salmonella to Flu
    Achew! i did'nt mean to...
    Achew! on you...
    shew, fly shew
    there's a roach, give me my shoe
    have you ever had the thought
    of just sweeping it out of the room
    pass the broom

    while washing dishes
    a baby insect swam across the bubbles
    so i slang it into the trashcan
    at least he can eat while he struggles
    to an inevitable death
    in a vicious cycle of breath

    do you dare fester a wasps' nest
    run, Forrest run, Forrest!
    commandments drove me to this
    thou shalt and thou arts
    for the very interpreters of these
    played their own part
    in the vicious cycle of breath

    inhaling murderous mildew
    the law says,
    if you murder him, we'll kill you
    vengance is mine

    on the heffer, the swine
    the eagle that's flying
    and should have been dying
    eyeing and spying on Lions
    the kingdom, power and glory is thine
    a shrine for the deaf, dumb and blind
    you no longer find

    rest in peace to those slain
    so many wounds, so many names
    too little peace, too much pain
    unbalanced karma makes one insane

    for to murder,
    one must have intent, commit and split
    killing is different
    you can only kill yourself, kind and spirit
    in between is death
    and the vicious cycle of breath MMM, KKK
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the stats is high and da M's keep rising as the K's keep coming
    this piece make u wonder and think .....keep droppin it to da minds
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How the act is viewed differs depending upon what side you stand on, the side of the accused or the slain. Keep us on our toes, poet.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    very deep here poet

    i felt the need of better self-control of myself on how i treat my body

    and about what i do and where i place myself

    peace
     
  5. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gotta agree with So'ja papa...this joint is deep my man, real deep!
     
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