Poetry Critiques : MURDA MODE

I say the devil deserves to be
stoned by the plans of Man
go in 2 murda mode and-->
murda my foes on advance.​

Like beastly primitives
2 da slaughter they dance
thinkin' good where the peace been broken
hopin' all ends well enough to keep on floatin'
it's been Spoken! [ASA]​

it rhymes but i'm not sure of the meaning behind the lines...
should the devil go into murda mode or is that a statement for you?
in short pieces like this you have to be clear with the reader or be abstract with the reader...either way, the lines must flow together without being disjointed...

one love
khasm
 

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