Quiet Poetry Lounge : Mumbo Jumbo

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  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mumbo Jumbo

    I'm wirtin' tihs rhmye in mumbo jumbo
    Cusaz teehr's jsut no tlieln'
    Waht a sbmao wlil do
    Aywlas lkoion' fa siht
    To run tlel msasa
    Tehy dno't mnid fkcuin' oevr me and u

    If yrou'e cheednnimorpg tihs
    U msut be a'ghit
    Wtih an Arifakn hraet
    And a fruute so bgrhit
    U jsut gto's to waer yuor sgaseslnus at nhgit

    I writin' this rmhye in mumbo jumbo
    Csuaz smbaos r wsroe tahn felis on siht
    Tehy mmiic tehir msetras wrod for wrod
    And u konw tehm fklos
    Cnat psas up a trud
    Taht wluod jsut be too asurbd

    If yrou'e cheednnimorpg tihs
    U msut be a'ghit
    Wtih an Arifakn hraet
    And smoe of tehm in shgit
    U jsut hvae to use yuor seecnlr at nhgit

    But tehn aigan
    Tihs anit nhtuin' but mumbo jumbo.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok Old Soul. I was trying to decipher this. Guess I should be glad I'm not the type to tell massa what you're up to. Cause you might be trying to get off the plantation or something...^5.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm writing this rhyme in mumbo jumbo
    cause there's just no telling
    what a (stuck) will do
    always looking fa 'ish
    to run tell massa
    they don't mind f' ing over me and u

    uyo vahe ot tge pu rylae in teh inormng...ot lofo em :lol:
    thanks, I enjoyed reading this mumbo jumbo​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was on point i hear ya write it speak it so we know it !!!!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Oldsoul

    @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

    I LOVE THE WAY YOUR MIND WORKS...

    This was so awesome...I had to read it slow
    but I was deciphering...I was, lol...

    ~~~~~ PRODIGIOUS ~~~~~


    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    Oh, this was original! I got it on the first try (I think!). Good use of code, brother!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was delightful as always very creative
    likes ya style indeed...puts my mind to work
    thanks for bring us your wisdom.....Angel
     
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