Black Poetry : Multitasking (Revisited)

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jump: Multitasking (Revisited)

    One hand positioned
    Beneath bottom
    Raising expectations
    Oral fixations
    One hand softly
    Caresses skin
    The spaces that secretly crave attention
    The smoothness of the neck
    The gentle area between breasts
    The underside of each bosom
    Hardened nipples
    The softness of stomach
    Leading to navel
    While tongue lashing
    The area I call the river of life.
    Simultaneously allowing heart convulsion
    Overflow her emotions
    Her face flushed
    When body touched
    Pushed she is toward second emission
    Tempo changes position
    Hand now raising legs
    Till exposed the nest for eggs
    Calves lay neatly on shoulders
    Temptation makes me bolder
    Though engulfed and consumed in the depths of her eyes
    while hand relates to inner thigh
    She elates flustering sigh
    I'm moved to a sensuous high
    (maybe because she's just so moved)
    Putting me deeper in the mood
    Cause I enjoy it when she's pleased
    Transformed movements she's now on hands and knees
    (I never was a lip reader, till this find day)
    Read every syllable, understood every word they say.
    Begging for, Slow deep thrust into swollen hip lips
    gently rub and flick her now extending tip.
    Moans of exhalation leave her mouth shows her appreciation
    And she pushes me to my back for reciprocation

    1-09-2004 revised 11-8-2004
     
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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa what a revisit this be
    wow happy to be reading you again !
    welcome back Nahshon
     
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    a-wha??!! Holy momma this is so hawt!!
     
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    QQ around...well now, so where's my courtesy glass of water? Can't say any more...er rummm.....very erotic piece poet!
     
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    now you know i love this vibe and your style what a revisit
    very nice....flow some mo....
     
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    Brotha nashon is BAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack :)
    you sure did revisit with emphasis my brotha lol
    It would seem the board is ablaze with pieces of passion :)
    But this one shone so bright you couldnt help but notice it :read: :shades:
    I am glad that you are back with us brotha...
    I didnt expect this to be such a steamy piece but what a pleasant surprise...
    than again...I have yet to be poetically disappointed by you :)
     
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    re:Multitasking

    Gurl you go. this is nice.
     
  8. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for your nice comments regarding this piece...
     
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    Daaaannnngg, this was hot. I was like, "oh my gawd." Got me fannin' myself and stuff. Props given for this one brotha.
     
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    I am so glad that you all liked this piece...
     
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