Black Poetry : Muddy River at milestone high

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tapping
    sitting
    on the grassy
    bank of da creek
    splashing in da
    murky stream
    spring air breeze
    cross the plans
    muddy river flow
    laughter lingers
    children chase
    after kites and
    play hopscotch
    figure four in da
    jump rope game
    sunset
    moonrise
    love still da same
    glassy starz stair
    two souls flair
    i bare my love
    as we waltz from
    the front porch
    singing da old songs
    as we embrace a
    gentle goodnight
    without a word spoken
    crickets tap dance
    da owl hoot
    on the step we rocking
    in our boots
    meadows flicker in da
    fields beyond
    good old black man
    rappin da blues
    murky stream dream
    come to pass of da
    muddy river at last
    from da mysterious
    milestone high :eek:hmy:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in thought i see this was soft and gentle
    enjoyed the thought :love:
    i likes this trip you took me on :wink:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah just thinking about the good old days
    and all that was going on in a day thankz sistah
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome..it was tight
     
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    nice drop Rich
    I've crossed some muddy rivers
    in fact
    drank muddy water and slept out
    in hollow logs :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man 7th u feel me i've been through it all too
    thankz for feeling this piece
     
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    You painted a very serene scene here Rich, yes, some memories are just that way.
     
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    yes sistah watz it really is as i walk down the lane of momeries
     
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    no place like home and da vision of yesteryears
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    really sweet piece
    loving piece,
    inside the "muddy waters"
    took me to many places
    fascinating . crossing images...
    i like this .. alot..
     
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