Black Poetry : Ms. Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jelani_Dalmar, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    Glancing back at our pass I can bear in mind the first time we were introduced. I was so young minded back then, and you were my adolescent equal…like most young people, I treated you immaturely, surely not able to embrace your grace, you’d allowed me to face my troubles, and juvenile struggles. Teacher not feeling me, Mom & Pops not understanding me, my crush not diggin me, but it was you who defined me…threw my trials and tribulations you stood behind me…I finally found someone I could vent too, someone to help me convey the things I go threw…someone to sit quietly alone with…and feel at peace with myself, and if no one else, understood , the bond we share, we could care less…cause you bought out the best in me, allowing me to nurture my creativity my sensuality my originality, you positively made me a better man. You speak to me in ways that no one else has or can. I have grown to become your biggest fan, schooling me to understand the power of words…creative ways of using nouns, adjectives and verbs… able to purge my soul of all the bottled up mess I kept hidden for so long, I know I belong with you…you…simplify my troubles, channel my pains, cradle my frustrations, enabling me to gain & retain the knowledge of your collective words….You’ve grown on me, you’ve open up opportunities for me, allowing me to express me…that is why I fell in love with you , Ms Poetry….
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have fallen in love,
    with Ms. Poetry.
    and there is no one else,
    to love better than she....................(lovin' it)
     
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    i am likin this:D
     
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    Very nice Jelani

    Very Nice flow. Nothing like Ms. Poetry. Bringing out the best of me. Seeking nothing in return. Stretching boundarys while I learn and grow. Like you said when no one hears. Ms. Poetry has both my ears. My hands and heart. Mind and soul. Scribing words my mind do hold. Since I met this lady grace I find she always there for me. Never will never abandon me. Allowing me to say. What I feel. She never judges.
     
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    this was nice it reminded me of an old song by common sense called i use to love her
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this ..
    Ms. poetry got ya...
    flow on..:angel1:
     
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    fa sho and her bro Mr.Poetry be at my place all the time lol :)
     
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    I 2 ermember when we first met...that is a day we all will never forget.
     
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    I feel you

    Jelani_Dalmar, It is interesting when one is truely touched by someone's creative flow for it does bring out the best in you. Your inner-self feels the power and it knows right from the top this person can understand my emotional needs. For their words encase you like a smooth warm blanket even in difficult times. I can understand why you feel the way you do and your expression is a tribute to your special friend's abilities, thanks for sharing your most treasured moment.
     
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