Black Poetry : Ms Good n Plenty

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  1. Neb Akhu Ra

    Neb Akhu Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. Good an’ Plenty


    Ms Good and Plenty,

    is there any more room in dem jeans?

    u know for ur caramel sugar

    im a feign,

    so can i,

    fit in dem jeans,

    dig in ya scene,

    show you what they mean,

    that it hurts so good,

    u know u should,

    close down the factory cuz dat recipe belongs to me,

    and its giving me,

    the only cavity,

    i ever had,

    tryna make dem other nagas mad,

    cuz u da BAD-dest thing they ever seen,

    if u know what i mean,

    i wanna hold u,

    let my pestel mould you,

    kiss ur lips with my lips,

    and slide my tongue to the tattoo on

    ur right hip,

    **** im whipped,

    where were u,

    when i needed you,

    when my soul cried out at night for u,

    when the demons i would fight to find you,

    ur my diamond,

    just wanna mine u,

    that is make u mine,

    press pause on time while i stare into ur eyes SUBLIME-ly,

    symbolically, u r the moon

    and i the sun, ruling creation together as one,

    i give the heat,

    and u da increase,

    at the very least

    u r PERFECTION,

    a finite manifestation of HIS infinite blessings,

    Ms. Good an Plenty,

    is there any more room,

    for me??
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    appreciation of the blessings of...

    ...the beauty HE provided for us.
    gave us
    showed us
    the way to the rivers and streams
    ...the deliciously decadent
    caramel cream
    that begs the tasting of
    appreciative lips
    on hips
    and nips
    over so many trips
    from mountains to valleys
    even down the darkest alleys
    of her love.

    SPEAK POET.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    boyee if there ain't no room

    before don't miss her next opening

    lol

    nah for real playa i'm not mad at your mac mode

    get yours man

    that's what's up

    peace
     
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    Perhaps Ms Good n Plenty has plenty of room for ya. I enjoyed this playful scribe here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    is there any more room in them jean ! no doubt i bet she got lots of room fo ya !
    so ya gonna fit in there or what........i enjoyed this funtown playful thread.
     
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    Wow! I enjoyed the playful expression of a man's desire for a woman....Ms Good n Plenty! Excellent flow poet!
     
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    For some reason I could hear Prince in the background of this piece lol
    Brotha Neb Akhu Ra :read: where are you from?
    You remind me of one of the young volunteers at one of my centers... young cat from Montserrat
    Always felt like he couldnt find his "one"
    Then when he stopped looking :read: she came to him :)
    I am sure my young brotha... that soon enough, your um "miss thang" with brains and err uhhh "jean-packings" alike will discover you soon enough :)
    :read:
     
  8. Neb Akhu Ra

    Neb Akhu Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sis. lol. im sure she will come too. Im a mix, my mother is descended from enslaved Afreekans and my father is a donqalawi from Sudan.
     
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