Black Poetry : Ms Behavin'

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  1. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms Behavin

    Glancing up, I catch your eye
    You seem to be studying me to my delighted surprise
    A look of intensity glows in your gaze
    My bold return look seemed to amaze, but
    You recover quickly and look once more
    At this striking beauty you'd like to explore
    Close up .... from afar .... or maybe in your dreams
    You vaguely wonder : Is she as sensual as she seems ?
    The sense that you're still looking amuses to no end
    Devilishly, I ponder ways to make your interest deepen
    So I lick my luscious lips and play with my thick silky hair
    Look up and fix you with my most seductive stare
    I deeply inhale causing my full bossom to noticeabley increase, while
    With my manicured fingertips I caress my own exposed cocoa-brown knees
    You're caught off guard and strain for a better look
    As gleefully I chuckle hid behind my library book
    Like a lion stalking his prey, stealthfully to me you make your way.
    Then to your utter disapointment you spy my wedding ring, I shrug ....
    Sorry sweety, things aren't always as they seem
    Just call me ... Ms Behavin'


    Akilah - Jan 2004 :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was beautiful tyte drop
    lovin da flow
     
  3. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you kind Sir... coming from a poet such as your self that really means something... much appreciation...

    Much Peace,

    Akilah :spinstar:

     
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    :jumping: Akilah Sisterrrrrrrrrrr! :luv:

    i saw youre name ,(remember me i was in the chatroom liberty thanks for youre support sista , than in that labirynt on that moment )

    You got and a strong way of writting...

    Wecome here at desthee :wave:!!


    Keep writting...

    Much love :heart: liberty..
     
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    Yes glancing up you did catch my eye. Ms Behavin

    Loving your flow your sweet behavior. Can we talk anyway, yes I see your ring, and you belong to another. He has your heart, but you have my undivided concentration. Can we talk, other things to mention. Maybe your book, or your love for attention. It was nice.. you know I can appreciate. Blessed to share a moment with you. Your filled with elated moments. Capturing the eye, leads to the mind, down my back across my spine. To my heart.
     
  6. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heyyyyyyy Sister Liberty !!!!! :luvv: Of course I remember you... how could I ever forget :confused: Thank you so much for your warm words of encouragement... and you are very welcome indeed !!!! Much love Sister Poetess .. :heart: and...

    Much Peace,

    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  7. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwww .... :blush: Thank you for gracing me with your presence Brother Hodee ... your poetry is unparalleled ... always fresh and :new: ...

    And oh yes... you are always most welcome to share my flow :flirt: **giggles**

    Much Peace,

    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    yes this is a beautiful drop :)
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Thank you Sister Blue :x:

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    Heyyyyyyyyy.... Sister Akilah!!!!!!
    likes ya flow
    nicely posed....
    Peace Angel